【真题再现1】
你喜欢过生日吗?你的生日过得开心吗?每个人都曾有难以忘怀的生日。请以My Birthday为题写一篇短文,介绍你最开心、最难忘的一次生日,让大家分享你生日的快乐。(2011年衡阳卷)
要求:1. 词数:80左右;
2. 语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
3. 文中不能出现自己的真实姓名和所在学校的名称。
【参考范文1】:
My Birthday
March 5th is my birthday. This year I celebrated my birthday in a different way. In the morning,I got up early and cooked breakfast for my parents. At school,I helped my deskmates to repair their broken chairs. After school,I took my birthday cake to the home for the aged. The old men were so happy to see me. All of them hoped that I would be back again.
What a joyful birthday it was!
点评:这是一篇记叙文,作者第一句话就交代了生日的时间,开门见山,直奔主题,值得学习。然后说明庆祝生日的方式与往年不同,接着以时间(in the morning,at school,after school)为主线详细阐述其不同点。最后用感叹句表达自己的感受,同时也表达了帮助别人的意义。短文思路清晰、语言简洁、主题突出、结构完整。
【真題再现2】
假如你是图片中的人物,请你根据图画内容及所给提示,完成下面的日记。(2011年湘潭卷)
June 7th Tuesday Sunny
I got up late this morning. My alarm clock didn’t work.
【参考范文2】:
June 7th Tuesday Sunny
I got up late this morning. My alarm clock didn’t work. When I woke up,it was 7:10. So I washed my face quickly and ran to the bus stop without breakfast. By the time I got there,I missed the school bus because it had already gone. So I had to walk to school. Finally,when I got to school,it was already 9:10. I was late for class. When the teacher asked for my homework,I found I had left it at home. What a bad day it was!
点评:该篇是日记式应用文,为常考的文体。作者根据图片提示的内容,清楚地交代了周二早上发生的事情。最大亮点在于时间状语的使用多样。如:when I woke up,by the time I got there,finally等。含过去完成时的复合句运用也非常恰当。最后的感叹句What a bad day!抒发了作者的感受。
【真题再现3】
许多学习生活中的烦恼都会使人产生压力。为了更好地发现及解决同学们存在的心理压力问题,学校特意举行了一次以Less Pressure,Better Life为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你准备发言稿,谈谈你的一些缓解压力的好办法,与同学们分享,内容包括:
1. 同学们中普遍存在的压力是什么;
2. 你的压力是什么;
3. 你是如何缓解压力的。
注意:文中不能出现真实的姓名和校名。词数80~100;短文的开头已给出(不计入总词数)。(浙江省台州卷)
Hello,boys and girls!
Pressure is a serious problem in today’s world. Students in our class are under too much pressure.
That’s all. Thank you!
【参考范文3】:
Less Pressure,Better Life
Hello,boys and girls!
Pressure is a serious problem in today’s world. Students in our class are under too much pressure. Some students can’t get on well with their classmates,while others may worry about their exams.
I’m always under pressure,too. My parents want me to be the top student in my class. So they send me to all kinds of after-classes at weekends.
Last Monday evening,I had a talk with my mother. I told her I was not lazy. I really felt tired. I needed time to relax. My mother agreed me at last.
So in my opinion a conversation with parents is a good idea to solve the problem.
That’s all. Thank you!
点评:这篇范文先对班内同学普遍存在的压力做了说明,接着介绍了自己的压力以及解决压力的方法。层次清晰、内容全面、结构完整。以自己的亲身经历为例子,具有亲和力,也更具有说服力。
【技巧点拨】
从历年各地的中考英语作文题目看,无论是哪种文体,涉及的内容和主题都贴近学生的生活。针对身边的事情和现象,结合自己、学校、家庭和社会进行写作,让同学们能有感而发、有话可说。
分析以上三篇范文发现,只要大家做到认真审题、语法正确、连接恰当、妙用复合句、精彩结束,作文成绩一定令人满意。
Powerful Sentences For English Writing
英语写作实用句型
在英语写作中,有的句型搭配功能很强,适用于各种文体。多积累和背诵这些句型,会使写作得心应手。仔细体会并尝试背诵下列句子中运用的词汇及句式。
【日常生活篇】
1. Do you feel tired without having enough rest?
没有足够的休息你感觉累吗?
2. I’m afraid that I can’t get used to the new school.
我担心不能适应新的学校生活。
3. My junior middle school life will come to an end soon. But I will never forget the things that have happened in the past three years.
我的初中生活就要结束了,但是我永远都不会忘记这三年里发生的点点滴滴。
4. Keeping a balance diet is very important.
保持平衡膳食非常重要。
5. We should form the good habit of eating more vegetables and fruit.
我们应该养成多吃蔬菜和水果的好习惯。
6. It’s important to have three meals a day.
一日三餐很重要。
7. Playing computer games has become an important part of his life and it seriously influences his study.
玩电脑游戏成为他生活中重要的一部分,已严重影响他的学习。
8. Mobile phones are of great importance in our everyday life.
手机在我们的日常生活中起着非常重要的作用。
9. As you know,doing morning exercises everyday is good for your health.
人人皆知,每天做早操对你的健康有好处。
10. My topic today is how to eat in a healthy way.
我今天的话题是怎样吃得健康。
【环境保护篇】
1. Taking care of our environment is very important.
爱护环境非常重要。
2. Whenever you live,you can do something around your neighbourhood.
不管住在哪里,你都可以在住所周围做些事情。
3. It is our duty to keep our environment clean and tidy.
保持环境干净、整洁是我们的责任。
4. If everyone makes a countribution to protecting the environment,the world will become much more beautiful.
如果人人为保护环境做些贡献,世界就会变得更加美丽。
5. It’s a pleasant way to keep our city clean and tidy.
这是使我们城市干净、整洁的好办法。
6. It’s wasteful to throw away paper and metal.
随便扔纸和金属是浪费行为。
7. We all need a healthy environment,but we produce waste every day and it does harm to our environment.
我们大家都需要一个健康的环境,但是我们每天都生产垃圾,这对我们的环境有害。
8. Though we are young,we can still do something to help.
虽然我们还小,但仍然可以做一些对保护环境有用的事。
9. In fact,even the simplest everyday activities can make a real difference to the environment.
事實上,即使是非常简单的日常行为也会对环境产生很大的不同。
10. Remember these three words:reduce,reuse and recycle.
记住这些词:减少、重新利用和再利用。
【活动、叙事篇】
1. The best time visit my town is in May,because it’s neither too cold nor too hot.
游览我的家乡最好的时间在5月,因为那时天气不冷也不热。
2. My hometown is a best time to visit. There are many palces of interest here,such as...
我的家乡是旅游观光的好地方。这里有很多名胜古迹,像……
3. I had a picnic with my parents during the May Day,and we had a very good time.
五一期间我和父母去野餐,过得很愉快。
4. We caught sight of a stream with green grass and beautiful flowers on both sides.
我们看到一条两边长满绿草、开满野花的小溪。
5. We were completely amazed at the wonder and the greatness of nature.
我们完全被大自然的奇妙和伟大折服了。
6. I spent the whole day in the countryside with my friends,enjoying the fine scenery and fresh air in the country.
我和朋友们在乡下度过了整个下午,欣赏美丽的风景,呼吸新鲜的空气。
7. We enjoyed ourselves very much. / We had a great time.
我们玩得很高兴。
8. What a wonderful weekend / holiday / day we had!
我们过得真愉快啊!
9. I’m looking forward to having the summer holiday.
我盼望暑假的到来。
10. The USA is a big country to visit,so choose carefully the places to see and the time you go.
美国幅员辽阔,需仔细挑选要去的地方和要去的时间。